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Sherie Hartle's avatar

So beautiful and honest, I thank you.

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Will Dibrell's avatar

Thank you, Bill. Thank you for your voice. Thank you.

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Will Dibrell's avatar

Thank you, Bill. Thank you for your voice. Thank you.

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Terri's avatar

As usual, Bill, your words are powerful, meaningful, thought-provoking. Thanks you for sharing the museum of Bill. ❤️

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Judy Jeffers's avatar

“the words ran away…”. Mine,too. Thank you for yours!

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Sharey's avatar

“All That’s Promised” packs such a sweet punch with so few words, as only a poem and poet can do. Well done!

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Sharey's avatar

Yes, terribly important! Thank you, Bill, (and to Gail for prodding you) for reaching for the words and writing about reaching for them. When you write and share your work, your “museum of me” becomes a “museum of the times” - this is what poets do/can do. We are all struggling with this war(s) or trying our best to avoid doing so. Giving voice and balancing it with what Spring means today, now, amidst a war far away, so necessary. Go, Bill!

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Yvonne's avatar

These words brought me peace in a troubled world. I am grateful for Spring. Thank you.

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Kris in Austin's avatar

Dearest Friend - “THIS makes me happy” such a gift you give ❣️

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Jean Fogel's avatar

All of this, the whole of it, what we need. Thank you Bill, so mcuh.

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Martha Ward's avatar

Your words - "I’m thinking silence may be the most articulate statement of all.

And then I think – this very struggle to find the words, even if they are simply that we are here, struggling, is also terribly important." It is the human condition, as you say, to give expression to the whole of it, in whatever form speaks to/for that person. It seems particularly hopeful to me that indeed we humans continue to reach to express, and thereby connect through all our state of feeling - such emotions are the source of change, healing for ourselves and others.

The picture of the drop of dew/water suspended speaks to me of the creative process, as we receive and feed ourselves into understanding, acceptance, even revolution - whatever is ours to do - a poem is sufficient. I felt your earliest dated poem in this series summed up for me the struggles and the birthing of change in the prior poems. Thank you, Bill.

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Bill Jeffers's avatar

Thanks, Martha - I really like that insight - our creations, like buds emerging - what comes out of us being promised only the light of day - the opportunity to be shared.

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Margaret Keys's avatar

That image is arresting Bill as are your musings about sharing your poetry

The poems that touched me most were the spring ones

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carolyn's avatar

You have so many voices, Bill! Loved the simplicity and beauty of "All that's Promised. By the way, going to snow here.

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